急求这2篇英语作文的修改,越快越好!中考水平以上1.春节快要到了,你在美国的一位朋友Mike想了解你今年的春节计划,请写一封回信给他,告诉他你打算怎样过春节(80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)开头:Dear Mike,Last time you asked me what I am going to do during the Spring Festival.Now I would like to tell you sth about my plan.(文章开始)The family membe
2019-06-21
急求这2篇英语作文的修改,越快越好!中考水平以上
1.春节快要到了,你在美国的一位朋友Mike想了解你今年的春节计划,请写一封回信给他,告诉他你打算怎样过春节(80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
开头:Dear Mike,
Last time you asked me what I am going to do during the Spring Festival.Now I would like to tell you sth about my plan.(文章开始)The family members get together to celebrate the festival on the day before the first day of a new year in lunar calendar.We enjoy delicious food and watch the special show for the festival on TV.I usually set off firecrackers with my cousins when our parents are watching TV.We believe that it may get rid of bad things.For children,the most important part of the Festival is getting lucky money.We bow to the older people and wish them a happy New Year and they will give us lucky money in red envelopes.
(结尾)Please send my best wishes to your family!
Yours,Tom
2.上星期,学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论.以下是你班家长的观点:多数家长认为作业多有好处,而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利.请你根据下面的提示,用英语作一简要介绍并表明你自己的观点.
Most parents A few parents
1)review what students have learned take a lot of time
2)develop students’ minds cannot have a good rest
3)stop students playing computer games cannot do the things students like
可适当增加细节,要求意思连贯,语句通顺.词数80左右;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)
开头:Last week our class had a parents’ meeting.At the meeting,all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not.Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful.
(我的观点开始)In my opinion,students in our ages shouldn’t be given too much homework,we don’t want a life full of homework.If there is so much homework that we cannot finish,some students will be afraid of the homework,even try to stop doing it.That’s very terrible.We need time to have some sports and read some books,not homework any time.But no homework is also horrible.Too much free time will make students don’t know what to do.So I hope teachers can give us the best and least exercises to review what we have learned and improve the knowledge.
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第一篇文章：春节计划：This is my festival plan.the first day,we will celebrate with my family together. We will enjoy the delicious food and watch the TV. I also can play the firecracker with my cousins. We believe that it may get rid of bad things.For the children,they like money,because it is lucky money. We will bow to the older people and wish them happy in the New Year.This is our Chinese spring festival.
第二篇文章：怎样学才是效果最好的.Our class had a parents’ meeting at the last week.At the meeting time,the parents talked about too much homework is good or not. Many parents thought that doing too much homework was useful. In my opinion,I don’t think do the too much homework is useful to a student,sometimes we need have a rest,not just do the homework.If have too much homework,we couldn’t finish it. Some students will be afraid of do the homework,even never do it again. That’s so terrible.We need time do our own things,just like read books,do some sports and so on.But if not homework,I think that it’s also no good.Because we nothing to do it.So I think do the teacher should teach us how to study,how to review,not just for the exam.
第一篇文章：春节计划：This is my festival plan.the first day,we will celebrate with my family together. We will enjoy the delicious food and watch the TV. I also can play the firecracker with my cousins. We believe that it may get rid of bad things.For the children,they like money,because it is lucky money. We will bow to the older people and wish them happy in the New Year.This is our Chinese spring festival.
第二篇文章：怎样学才是效果最好的.Our class had a parents’ meeting at the last week.At the meeting time,the parents talked about too much homework is good or not. Many parents thought that doing too much homework was useful. In my opinion,I don’t think do the too much homework is useful to a student,sometimes we need have a rest,not just do the homework.If have too much homework,we couldn’t finish it. Some students will be afraid of do the homework,even never do it again. That’s so terrible.We need time do our own things,just like read books,do some sports and so on.But if not homework,I think that it’s also no good.Because we nothing to do it.So I think do the teacher should teach us how to study,how to review,not just for the exam.