上面是中文的,下面是英文的,好的话,
暑假到了,炎炎的夏日,知了叫了,我在这个暑假里有了个新的安排.每天早上7点钟起床洗脸刷牙,接着出门锻炼身体：去爬烂柯山.锻炼好再到附近的小摊上买早饭吃.吃好早饭,回家后,读读英语,做下数学题目.到了中午,吃完中饭就帮父母干干家务,然后休息下看电视,睡觉.睡好觉后去游泳晚饭吃好后,玩电脑,休息.这是我一天大概的安排.有什么不好的地方可以修改.名师点评：虽然小作者的这个暑假安排表较为简单,但也体现出了小作者要把自己的生活安排得合理紧凑的一片苦心.建议做一张详细的作息时间表,这样就能更有效地利用时间了.优秀是一种习惯,成功来源于坚持.希望能取得更大的进步!
Summer arrived,hot summer day,cicadas called,I in this summer with a new arrangement.Get up at 7 o 'clock every morning wash a face to brush my teeth,and then go out to exercise:go to climb the lousy plays.Exercise good to the stall near buy breakfast.Eat good breakfast,after coming home,and read English,do math problem.By noon,eat lunch will help parents do housework,then a break watching TV and go to bed.A good night's sleep go swimming after dinner,playing computer,have a rest.This is my day of about arrangement.What bad places can be modified.Teacher comment on:although small the author's this summer schedule is simple,but also reflects the young writer to their own life for a rational compact a painstaking.Suggest a detailed timetable,so that it can be more effective use of time.Is a good habit,success comes from persistence.Hope can make great progress! 上面是中文的,下面是英文的,好的话,
暑假到了,炎炎的夏日,知了叫了,我在这个暑假里有了个新的安排.每天早上7点钟起床洗脸刷牙,接着出门锻炼身体：去爬烂柯山.锻炼好再到附近的小摊上买早饭吃.吃好早饭,回家后,读读英语,做下数学题目.到了中午,吃完中饭就帮父母干干家务,然后休息下看电视,睡觉.睡好觉后去游泳晚饭吃好后,玩电脑,休息.这是我一天大概的安排.有什么不好的地方可以修改.名师点评：虽然小作者的这个暑假安排表较为简单,但也体现出了小作者要把自己的生活安排得合理紧凑的一片苦心.建议做一张详细的作息时间表,这样就能更有效地利用时间了.优秀是一种习惯,成功来源于坚持.希望能取得更大的进步!
Summer arrived,hot summer day,cicadas called,I in this summer with a new arrangement.Get up at 7 o 'clock every morning wash a face to brush my teeth,and then go out to exercise:go to climb the lousy plays.Exercise good to the stall near buy breakfast.Eat good breakfast,after coming home,and read English,do math problem.By noon,eat lunch will help parents do housework,then a break watching TV and go to bed.A good night's sleep go swimming after dinner,playing computer,have a rest.This is my day of about arrangement.What bad places can be modified.Teacher comment on:although small the author's this summer schedule is simple,but also reflects the young writer to their own life for a rational compact a painstaking.Suggest a detailed timetable,so that it can be more effective use of time.Is a good habit,success comes from persistence.Hope can make great progress!