请高手帮忙修改新概念英语二73课作文.answer:They boy returned home at night.He looks sick,cold and hungry,because there was neither enough food to eat nor warm bed to sleep while playing truant.Before he returned,his parents were very worried.They had been looking for him
2019-04-30
请高手帮忙修改新概念英语二73课作文.
answer:
They boy returned home at night.He looks sick,cold and hungry,because there was neither enough food to eat nor warm bed to sleep while playing truant.Before he returned,his parents were very worried.They had been looking for him for three days.When they learned that their son had been found and would arrive by ship at night,they met him at the harbour.Everyone could imagine their reactions at that time.
The boy returned to school next morning.He was afraid he would be punished till he seen their friends at school.The boys gave him a hero’s welcome and asked him all kinds of questions.When he walked into the lead master’s office,he felt very serious.To his surprise,the lead master punished him by making him give a talk to the whole school about his experiences abroad.
希望提出错误的地方，如何改正或应该如何表达更准确。
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第二句looks应改为looked 首句开篇是过去式,那么后面应该也是过去式,千万不能出现时态不一致的情况.
第二段 afraid后加that seen改为saw serious 这个 我觉得改为nervous比较好
唔,句与句之间可以多加一些连接词,就会增色不少噢!新2后面的作文很好的,很助于提高写作能力的
第二句looks应改为looked 首句开篇是过去式,那么后面应该也是过去式,千万不能出现时态不一致的情况.
第二段 afraid后加that seen改为saw serious 这个 我觉得改为nervous比较好
唔,句与句之间可以多加一些连接词,就会增色不少噢!新2后面的作文很好的,很助于提高写作能力的