Hello，everyone．I'm Simon．Back to the life in the last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress （进步） in some ways．【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】
First，I used to be careless with my study．But now I listen carefully in class．【要点一，学习情况】
Second，I spent most of my free time listening to music【高分句型二，注意spend的使用】，watching TV and playing computer games．Luckily，with my teachers'help，I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise．【要点二，业余生活情况】
Third，in the past I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks and CDs．But now I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas．I want to give them a helping hand．【要点三，爱心】
I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9．【要点四，展望未来】
Thanks for your listening! Hello，everyone．I'm Simon．Back to the life in the last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress （进步） in some ways．【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】
First，I used to be careless with my study．But now I listen carefully in class．【要点一，学习情况】
Second，I spent most of my free time listening to music【高分句型二，注意spend的使用】，watching TV and playing computer games．Luckily，with my teachers'help，I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise．【要点二，业余生活情况】
Third，in the past I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks and CDs．But now I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas．I want to give them a helping hand．【要点三，爱心】
I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9．【要点四，展望未来】
Thanks for your listening!