Dear Steven My name is Zhang Ming. I like seeing films especially action films.My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. He is one of the greatest actors. He devoted much of his time to charity.I am busy with my school work on weekdays. I usually see films at weekends.But my parents don’t allow me to see films. They think seeing films too much is bad for my eyes and body. They think that I am not a hardworking boy. But I don’t agree with them. I think we should see some films to relax ourselves at weekends. Then we can study better.My dear friend what’s your opinion? Can you tell me?Best wishesZhang Ming

分 析：
这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，主语为第一人称。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用固定短语如be busy with，too much等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结 牢记一些固定句式及短语 写作时就可以适当引用 使文章的表达更有逻辑性 更富有条理.
考点：
话题作文。

Dear Steven My name is Zhang Ming. I like seeing films especially action films.My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. He is one of the greatest actors. He devoted much of his time to charity.I am busy with my school work on weekdays. I usually see films at weekends.But my parents don’t allow me to see films. They think seeing films too much is bad for my eyes and body. They think that I am not a hardworking boy. But I don’t agree with them. I think we should see some films to relax ourselves at weekends. Then we can study better.My dear friend what’s your opinion? Can you tell me?Best wishesZhang Ming

分 析：
这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，主语为第一人称。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用固定短语如be busy with，too much等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结 牢记一些固定句式及短语 写作时就可以适当引用 使文章的表达更有逻辑性 更富有条理.
考点：
话题作文。