One important lesson I've learnt from school life is that success comes from hard work．（开头点题）
       When I entered the high school a year ago，I was ashamed of my English．Since my English teacher encouraged me to work harder，I've made rapid progress and gained great confidence．Honestly speaking，I made it a　rual to read aloud English for half an hour every morning．（高分句型）And on my way to school or home I kept listening to English downloaded．Also I learnt every text by heart until I could recite it．Meanwhile，I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class．（高分句型）To my delight，my efforts    paid off and I often got a high score in English．Now　I　have　become　the top student in school．（举出具体事例）
　　So I believe that success belongs to those who are hard working．In fact，learning English isn't only learning a subject but also　having　a wonderful journey of discovery （with great efforts）．（总结） One important lesson I've learnt from school life is that success comes from hard work．（开头点题）
       When I entered the high school a year ago，I was ashamed of my English．Since my English teacher encouraged me to work harder，I've made rapid progress and gained great confidence．Honestly speaking，I made it a　rual to read aloud English for half an hour every morning．（高分句型）And on my way to school or home I kept listening to English downloaded．Also I learnt every text by heart until I could recite it．Meanwhile，I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class．（高分句型）To my delight，my efforts    paid off and I often got a high score in English．Now　I　have　become　the top student in school．（举出具体事例）
　　So I believe that success belongs to those who are hard working．In fact，learning English isn't only learning a subject but also　having　a wonderful journey of discovery （with great efforts）．（总结）