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雅思英语口语小文,求英语大神帮忙看看有没错的地方和可以修改的地方What i want to say is Stanley ho’s family business ,which runs a lot of companies including gaming industry,real estate,airline business and etc.Stanley ho is a legendary person who is the richest man in Macao and have 4 wi

2019-06-19

雅思英语口语小文,求英语大神帮忙看看有没错的地方和可以修改的地方
What i want to say is Stanley ho’s family business ,which runs a lot of companies including gaming industry,real estate,airline business and etc.
Stanley ho is a legendary person who is the richest man in Macao and have 4 wifes and 17 children,almost everybody in china knows him and his business.
When it comes to Macao,people not only think of Ruins of Saint [sent]Paul but also think of Lisboa casinos.Many tourists to Macao will spend some money on casinos for fun and excitement,even some people Made a special trip to Macau's gambling ,they carrying much money as a bet and desire to getting rich overnight.,
the family business of Stanley ho is quiet successful ,it Drives Macao's economy ,nearly one-third of local people directly or indirectly benefit from his business.
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What i want to say is (about) Stanley ho’s family business ,which runs a lot of companies including gaming industry,real estate,airline business and etc.
Stanley ho is a legendary person who is the richest man in Macao and (has) 4 wifes and 17 children (.) (A)lmost everybody in china knows him and his business.
When it comes to Macao,people not only think of Ruins of Saint Paul but also think of Lisboa casinos.Many tourists (who go) to Macao will spend some money on casinos for fun and excitement(.) (S)ome people (even make) a special trip to Macau (for) gambling.(T)hey (carry) much money as a bet and desire to (get) rich overnight.,
the family business of Stanley ho is quiet successful(.) (I)t drives Macao's economy(.) (N)early one-third of local people directly or indirectly benefit from his business.
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修改的写在括号里了
What i want to say is (about) Stanley ho’s family business ,which runs a lot of companies including gaming industry,real estate,airline business and etc.
Stanley ho is a legendary person who is the richest man in Macao and (has) 4 wifes and 17 children (.) (A)lmost everybody in china knows him and his business.
When it comes to Macao,people not only think of Ruins of Saint Paul but also think of Lisboa casinos.Many tourists (who go) to Macao will spend some money on casinos for fun and excitement(.) (S)ome people (even make) a special trip to Macau (for) gambling.(T)hey (carry) much money as a bet and desire to (get) rich overnight.,
the family business of Stanley ho is quiet successful(.) (I)t drives Macao's economy(.) (N)early one-third of local people directly or indirectly benefit from his business.
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