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我首次与外国人接触
【内容提示】
根据下列要点写一篇记叙文：
①上个星期天你去了一趟无锡市.你走进一家缝纫店,那里正在举办时装展览.②你看见一名中年的外国男子,正在向一名女店员打手势.③这位男子不懂汉语,女店员不懂英语.她把价格写在纸上,外宾也看不懂.④你走上前问过店员一件衬衣多少钱后,用英语转告外宾148元一件.⑤他觉得太贵,问能否降价.店员答应降为120元,他一下子就买了10件.⑥他离开前送给你一支很好的钢笔.并欢迎他再来.
【作文示范】
My First Meeting with a Foreigner
胡德青
Last Sunday I went to the city of Wuxi.When I entered a tailor＇s shop,I found there were lots of people because there was a fashion show①.Suddenly I noticed that a middle-aged foreigner was gesticulating② to a saleswoman and pointing to a new shirt.It was clear that he wanted to buy the shirt,but he did not know the price,for he did not know Chinese.And the saleswoman did not know English.Though she wrote the price on the paper,he was still puzzled.
When I saw this,I went up to them.I asked the saleswoman the price of the shirt first and then I said to the foreigner in English,“One hundred and forty-eight yuan.” Hearing this he said to me,“Oh,thank you!But it＇s too expensive.Would you please ask her if she can make it cheaper?If she can ,I will buy ten.” I told her what he said ,and she agreed.In the end the foreigner paid 1,200 yuan for ten shirts.
Before he left,he gave me a nice pen.I thanked him and said to him ,“Welcome to our city .Good-bye!”
（选自胡德康《高三英语紧扣最新教材同步到课》）
【词语解释】
①fashion [＇f$M n] show 时装展览②gesticulate [dNes＇tikjuleit] v．（讲话时等）做手势；用姿势（或动作）示意
【写法指要】
本文作者采用顺序手法,记叙了第一次与外国人交谈的经过.全文基本包括了记叙文的六要素：时间（on Sunday）,地点（a tailor＇s shop）,人物（a foreigner,a saleswoman,and I）,事件（help a foreigner in buying a shirts）,原因（The saleswoman could not speak English and the foreigner could not speak Chinese．）和结果（All were satisfied．）.层次分明,交待清楚.全文可分为6个行为情节：1）我去逛商店；2）看见外国人向店员打手势；3）双方语言不通；4）我上前翻译；5）外国人买了10件衬衣；6）外国人送我小礼物,
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我首次与外国人接触
【内容提示】
根据下列要点写一篇记叙文：
①上个星期天你去了一趟无锡市.你走进一家缝纫店,那里正在举办时装展览.②你看见一名中年的外国男子,正在向一名女店员打手势.③这位男子不懂汉语,女店员不懂英语.她把价格写在纸上,外宾也看不懂.④你走上前问过店员一件衬衣多少钱后,用英语转告外宾148元一件.⑤他觉得太贵,问能否降价.店员答应降为120元,他一下子就买了10件.⑥他离开前送给你一支很好的钢笔.并欢迎他再来.
【作文示范】
My First Meeting with a Foreigner
胡德青
Last Sunday I went to the city of Wuxi.When I entered a tailor＇s shop,I found there were lots of people because there was a fashion show①.Suddenly I noticed that a middle-aged foreigner was gesticulating② to a saleswoman and pointing to a new shirt.It was clear that he wanted to buy the shirt,but he did not know the price,for he did not know Chinese.And the saleswoman did not know English.Though she wrote the price on the paper,he was still puzzled.
When I saw this,I went up to them.I asked the saleswoman the price of the shirt first and then I said to the foreigner in English,“One hundred and forty-eight yuan.” Hearing this he said to me,“Oh,thank you!But it＇s too expensive.Would you please ask her if she can make it cheaper?If she can ,I will buy ten.” I told her what he said ,and she agreed.In the end the foreigner paid 1,200 yuan for ten shirts.
Before he left,he gave me a nice pen.I thanked him and said to him ,“Welcome to our city .Good-bye!”
（选自胡德康《高三英语紧扣最新教材同步到课》）
【词语解释】
①fashion [＇f$M n] show 时装展览②gesticulate [dNes＇tikjuleit] v．（讲话时等）做手势；用姿势（或动作）示意
【写法指要】
本文作者采用顺序手法,记叙了第一次与外国人交谈的经过.全文基本包括了记叙文的六要素：时间（on Sunday）,地点（a tailor＇s shop）,人物（a foreigner,a saleswoman,and I）,事件（help a foreigner in buying a shirts）,原因（The saleswoman could not speak English and the foreigner could not speak Chinese．）和结果（All were satisfied．）.层次分明,交待清楚.全文可分为6个行为情节：1）我去逛商店；2）看见外国人向店员打手势；3）双方语言不通；4）我上前翻译；5）外国人买了10件衬衣；6）外国人送我小礼物,
这真是太费劲了,多给我加点分好吗