因为楼主没有说那段引起了你注意的广告是甚麼内容,所以我自己生安白造,作了文章须要的,词数连标点符号一共198个字,希望会令你满意.
Dear Mrs White,
Hello, how are you? I don't think that we have met. The reason I am writing to you is that I saw your advertisement in the local newspaper, and know that you are a private English tutor. But first, please let I introduce myself to you. My name is Lihua, a student from China, and I am 21 years old. I came over to Canada a year ago, and at the moment, I am undertaking an English training course.
Unfortunately, my mother tongue is still very strong. I need extra tuition to help me improve my accent and pronunciation. I am really glad that I have found your ads. I am hoping that you still have placements, which are not taken up yet. I would like to be enrolled as your new pupil. I also would like to have your tuition time time too, because I am a part time student, I have a day time job as well, so I need to have a tuition time that would be suitable for me. Look forward to hearing from you, and please reply to me as soon as possible. Thank you very much.
Yours Truly,
LiHua 因为楼主没有说那段引起了你注意的广告是甚麼内容,所以我自己生安白造,作了文章须要的,词数连标点符号一共198个字,希望会令你满意.
Dear Mrs White,
Hello, how are you? I don't think that we have met. The reason I am writing to you is that I saw your advertisement in the local newspaper, and know that you are a private English tutor. But first, please let I introduce myself to you. My name is Lihua, a student from China, and I am 21 years old. I came over to Canada a year ago, and at the moment, I am undertaking an English training course.
Unfortunately, my mother tongue is still very strong. I need extra tuition to help me improve my accent and pronunciation. I am really glad that I have found your ads. I am hoping that you still have placements, which are not taken up yet. I would like to be enrolled as your new pupil. I also would like to have your tuition time time too, because I am a part time student, I have a day time job as well, so I need to have a tuition time that would be suitable for me. Look forward to hearing from you, and please reply to me as soon as possible. Thank you very much.
Yours Truly,
LiHua