高考英语作文请评分..My teachers（以下为我写的） 不算概括20分满分 请评分要求：(1)教师节迎来,表达你对老师的贺词(2)你老师帮助你的一次经历(3)120字左右My teachers are the harbour of my soul and the oasis of my heart,who safeguarded me whenever something bad happened and emboldened me when I was discouraged.It was my
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高考英语作文请评分..
My teachers（以下为我写的） 不算概括20分满分 请评分
要求：(1)教师节迎来,表达你对老师的贺词
(2)你老师帮助你的一次经历
(3)120字左右
My teachers are the harbour of my soul and the oasis of my heart,who safeguarded me whenever something bad happened and emboldened me when I was discouraged.It was my teachers who lightened my heart and lent their hands to me when I was drowned in setbacks .
Memory has never faded out in my mind.Time flashed back to a day when I lagged behind others in math.It was my teachers who wiped off my puzzle in math and encouraged me without any hesitation.As a result,I made great progress.
From my perspectives,words fail to convey my gratitude to my teachers.Were it not for them,I would not be what I am today.My dearest teachers ,if you are the light,I will be the shdow.I'll make you see the seeds you pick up blossom.
第一个要求应该是感谢词
优质解答
应该可以得到22或23分 !
虽然有部分语法错误和常识误区,但是通篇文章使用了较多的高级词汇和经典语句,另外,文章逻辑合理,重点突出,完全与要求吻合,实为难得!足见作者英语与行文功底 !
应该可以得到22或23分 !
虽然有部分语法错误和常识误区,但是通篇文章使用了较多的高级词汇和经典语句,另外,文章逻辑合理,重点突出,完全与要求吻合,实为难得!足见作者英语与行文功底 !