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初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,Today is sunday.Because today is weekend,so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do.I got up at 10:00 in the morning.Then I went to see the movie with my friend.In the evening with my family together and enjoy

2019-06-14

初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,
Today is sunday.
Because today is weekend,so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do.I got up at 10:00 in the morning.Then I went to see the movie with my friend.In the evening with my family together and enjoy the dinner.
How it is a beautiful day!
改成这样是不是好点?还有错误吗?
Today is sunday.
Because it is the weekend,so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do.I got up at 10:00 in the morning.Then I went to see a movie with my friend.In the evening I enjoyed dinner with my family.
What a beautiful day!
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2012-11-18
Today is weekend,so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do.I got up at 10:00 in the morning.Then I went to see the movie with my friend.In the evening,i enjoyed the dinner with my family.How it is a beautiful day!
because 和so 不能同用,同样用法的还有although 和 but
2012-11-18
Today is weekend,so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do.I got up at 10:00 in the morning.Then I went to see the movie with my friend.In the evening,i enjoyed the dinner with my family.How it is a beautiful day!
because 和so 不能同用,同样用法的还有although 和 but
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