Possible version: Nowadays people are talking about the expansion of college enrollment．This new policy adopted by the government benefits a lot of high school graduates and therefore the country as well．There used to be such a fierce competition among high school graduates to enter college that many of them studied too hard only to spoil their health．Even some of them killed themselves only because they failed in the entrance exams．Now they will have more chances to attend college and the country is also going to benefit from it．There will be more well-educated and highly qualified citizens and professionals which is essential to the development of the country． However now some students who otherwise can’t enter a college are not studying hard enough．They think now since colleges enroll more students they are more likely to be admitted into one of them even without a high score． Even though there is still room for improvement to this policy I think it is still a good one which brings more good than harm to the students and the nation．It should be carried out without doubt．
Possible version: Nowadays people are talking about the expansion of college enrollment．This new policy adopted by the government benefits a lot of high school graduates and therefore the country as well．There used to be such a fierce competition among high school graduates to enter college that many of them studied too hard only to spoil their health．Even some of them killed themselves only because they failed in the entrance exams．Now they will have more chances to attend college and the country is also going to benefit from it．There will be more well-educated and highly qualified citizens and professionals which is essential to the development of the country． However now some students who otherwise can’t enter a college are not studying hard enough．They think now since colleges enroll more students they are more likely to be admitted into one of them even without a high score． Even though there is still room for improvement to this policy I think it is still a good one which brings more good than harm to the students and the nation．It should be carried out without doubt．