帮我看下这篇英语短文、我只是个初三的、望各位看看、希望指出语法错误、（bear 我同学、Lao Shi老师）Dear bear：How time flies,I still remember the day that I first met you.At that time,when I was hearing someone new coming to our class,I was so excited and couldn't wait to see who it was.when I saw yo

2019-06-21

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帮我看下这篇英语短文、
我只是个初三的、望各位看看、希望指出语法错误、（bear 我同学、Lao Shi老师）
Dear bear：
How time flies,I still remember the day that I first met you.At that time,when I was hearing someone new coming to our class,I was so excited and couldn't wait to see who it was.when I saw you,I just began to pay attention to you,although you didn't know,As time went by,finally we get together,how strange it was.
But unluckily,this summer we are going to say goodbye to each other,I know this isn't our ending,because there is a promise between us,I have ever said I'm not a good boy because I can't make you feel the happiness...
Lao Shi said if you wanted to keep a habit,you must keep it doing for at least three months.maybe I can keep the habit to be used to caring about you.
step by step,I still look for the way to your heart.Do you know...
I'm so sorry that I have done nothing for you,I just can give you the best wishes and memories,I know you are always forgetful,but please remember me forever,whatever happens,you're the first one I can't forget...
（随便翻译下、谢谢、、、）
有没语法错误啊?、另外神奇怎么说、

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亲爱的小熊:
　　时光飞逝,我仍然记得那一天我第一次见到你.在那个时候,当我听到有人新来到我们的课堂上,我是如此的兴奋,迫不及待要看到底是谁.当我看到你,我就开始关注你,虽然你不知道,随着时间的流逝,最后我们聚在一起,多么奇怪,.
但遗憾的是,今年夏天我们要彼此说再见,我知道这不是我们的结局,因为我们之间有一个承诺,我曾说,我不是一个好男孩,因为我不能让你感觉幸福…
　　老师说如果你想使一个习惯,你必须让它做至少三个月的时间.也许我能保持这个习惯用来关心你.
　　一步一步,我仍在寻找你心的最好办法.你知道…
　　非常抱歉,我为你做什么,我就能给你最好的祝愿和回忆,我知道你总是健忘,但请永远记得我,无论发生什么,你是第一个我不能忘记…… 亲爱的小熊:
　　时光飞逝,我仍然记得那一天我第一次见到你.在那个时候,当我听到有人新来到我们的课堂上,我是如此的兴奋,迫不及待要看到底是谁.当我看到你,我就开始关注你,虽然你不知道,随着时间的流逝,最后我们聚在一起,多么奇怪,.
但遗憾的是,今年夏天我们要彼此说再见,我知道这不是我们的结局,因为我们之间有一个承诺,我曾说,我不是一个好男孩,因为我不能让你感觉幸福…
　　老师说如果你想使一个习惯,你必须让它做至少三个月的时间.也许我能保持这个习惯用来关心你.
　　一步一步,我仍在寻找你心的最好办法.你知道…
　　非常抱歉,我为你做什么,我就能给你最好的祝愿和回忆,我知道你总是健忘,但请永远记得我,无论发生什么,你是第一个我不能忘记……