英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦Dear Sir or Madman,I'm witing to apply for the job you post online on May 17th.I'm Li Hua from China,now I'm stuying in a high school near by Green Street.I have been look for a part-time job to make some money and keep myself busliy afte
2019-05-02
英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦
Dear Sir or Madman,
I'm witing to apply for the job you post online on May 17th.I'm Li Hua from China,now I'm stuying in a high school near by Green Street.I have been look for a part-time job to make some money and keep myself busliy after school.I think I'm the very person which suits the job.Firstly,I have much experinences in helping move the furniture and doing repairs.Secondly,I'm good for the computer.Thirdly,I'm a good driver so well.I'm looking to receiving you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
呃、那个应该是writing 、我打成witing了
DH_sister
嗯
第二个我打错了、是studying
优质解答
1.post改成posted
2.stuying改成studying(这个可能是你打字打错了)
3.near by改成near
4.look改成looking
5.busliy改成busy
6.which改成who
7.experiences去掉s
8.move改成moving
9.good for改成good at
10.so well改成as well
11.you改成your
1.post改成posted
2.stuying改成studying(这个可能是你打字打错了)
3.near by改成near
4.look改成looking
5.busliy改成busy
6.which改成who
7.experiences去掉s
8.move改成moving
9.good for改成good at
10.so well改成as well
11.you改成your