请帮助修改英文翻译,我翻译了一段中文,请帮助改正我的职业我是一名幼儿园老师。我小时候的梦想是当一名老师。我认为老师什么都知道,他们是世界上最棒的人。我慢慢长大,知道老师不是无所不能,无所不知的。但是我仍然想成为为一名老师。 My professionI’m a kindergartener . My dream was to become a teacher when I was .young. I think the teacher know everything ,and they a
2019-06-18
请帮助修改英文翻译,我翻译了一段中文,请帮助改正
我的职业
我是一名幼儿园老师。
我小时候的梦想是当一名老师。
我认为老师什么都知道,他们是世界上最棒的人。
我慢慢长大,知道老师不是无所不能,无所不知的。
但是我仍然想成为为一名老师。
My profession
I’m a kindergartener .
My dream was to become a teacher when I was .young.
I think the teacher know everything ,and they are the most excellent person
When I grow up, I know the teacher is not omnipotent and omniscient
But I still want to be a teacher
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更改的地方用【】圈出,()内注明原因。
My profession
I’m a kindergartener .
My dream was to become a teacher when I was young.
I think 【teachers】(照应后面的they,用复数)know everything ,and they are the most
excellent 【people】(前面they,后面用集合名词people,复数概念)+【in the world】 (照应汉语“世界上”)
When I grow up, I know the teacher is not omnipotent 【or】(否定句用or表示和) omniscient.
But I still want to be a teacher.
欢迎不懂继问,希望帮到你!
更改的地方用【】圈出,()内注明原因。
My profession
I’m a kindergartener .
My dream was to become a teacher when I was young.
I think 【teachers】(照应后面的they,用复数)know everything ,and they are the most
excellent 【people】(前面they,后面用集合名词people,复数概念)+【in the world】 (照应汉语“世界上”)
When I grow up, I know the teacher is not omnipotent 【or】(否定句用or表示和) omniscient.
But I still want to be a teacher.
欢迎不懂继问,希望帮到你!