帮我改改润色润色这边作文吧,并且提提建议.悬赏分视回答的真诚度给,Many teenagers are addicted to alcohol in the society of today.But drink for what?Many of them drink beers at parties held to celebrate their intimate friends’ birthday or just for entertainment.Also,someone may release hi
2019-05-23
帮我改改润色润色这边作文吧,并且提提建议.悬赏分视回答的真诚度给,
Many teenagers are addicted to alcohol in the society of today.But drink for what?Many of them drink beers at parties held to celebrate their intimate friends’ birthday or just for entertainment.Also,someone may release his or her bad emotions this way.
However,alcohol abuses are as harmful as over-smoking.Too much alcohol can raise the pressure of liver and gall bladder,and you may get hepatitis or even the deadly liver cancer consequently.Moreover,drinking too much can destroy your memory and understanding.But that’s nothing.The most terribly,you might lose your life after drinking too much while driving on the freeway.In order to warn people the harm of alcohol,the quote ‘Drinking is bid for health’ has already been printed on the package of alcohol.
Despite the fact,why do there exist so many alcohol addicts?Obviously,we haven’t yet tried our best.Teenagers should have been supposed to drink in moderation when young,so they would resist the temptation of alcohol when older.And on the other hand,we should enhance the price of alcohol to limit the amount of alcohol-consumers.Fortunately,maybe the best solution to prevent alcohol abuse will surface the boat in the coming day.
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如今社会上许多青少年酗酒成瘾.可是他们为什么要酗酒呢?他们中许多人主在庆祝朋友生日的聚会时或干脆只是为了娱乐时喝啤酒.另外,有人还会以这种方式来释放自己的坏心情.
然而,滥用酒精与过多吸烟同样有害.过多的酒精可以引起肚脏和胆囊血压升高,而且最终还可能患上肝炎或致使的肝癌.再者,过度饮酒还会毁掉记忆力和理解力.不过这还不算什么.最可怕的是,你可能在酗酒后在高速公路上驾车的时候（在交通事故中）丧生.为了警告人们醉酒的危害,在烟盒上已经印有下面的警告字样“酗酒有害健康.”
尽管这些事实,为什么还有这么多的酗酒者呢?显然,我们做的还不够.青少年们年少时应适量饮酒,因此他们在长大后才可以抑制酒精的诱惑.另一方面,我们应该提高酒的价格,限制酒精的消费.幸运的是,可能最佳的防止滥用酒精的解决办法就是在第二天检查一下.
surface the boat不能译成让船浮出水面,这是个比喻,应该是指进行检查
楼主这点儿分也太少了点儿吧,有分就给点儿,内容的确不错,所以才帮你翻译出来
如今社会上许多青少年酗酒成瘾.可是他们为什么要酗酒呢?他们中许多人主在庆祝朋友生日的聚会时或干脆只是为了娱乐时喝啤酒.另外,有人还会以这种方式来释放自己的坏心情.
然而,滥用酒精与过多吸烟同样有害.过多的酒精可以引起肚脏和胆囊血压升高,而且最终还可能患上肝炎或致使的肝癌.再者,过度饮酒还会毁掉记忆力和理解力.不过这还不算什么.最可怕的是,你可能在酗酒后在高速公路上驾车的时候（在交通事故中）丧生.为了警告人们醉酒的危害,在烟盒上已经印有下面的警告字样“酗酒有害健康.”
尽管这些事实,为什么还有这么多的酗酒者呢?显然,我们做的还不够.青少年们年少时应适量饮酒,因此他们在长大后才可以抑制酒精的诱惑.另一方面,我们应该提高酒的价格,限制酒精的消费.幸运的是,可能最佳的防止滥用酒精的解决办法就是在第二天检查一下.
surface the boat不能译成让船浮出水面,这是个比喻,应该是指进行检查
楼主这点儿分也太少了点儿吧,有分就给点儿,内容的确不错,所以才帮你翻译出来