第一篇：
1.We have a praty last sunday——have改had,时态错误,last sunday为过去时
2.I made my way the bathroom——way后加to,make one's way to someplace固定词组
3.I closed the door before me——before改behind根据语义“关上了·····的门”按逻辑应当是身后的门,而不是面前的门,不然我都还没进去呢.
4.A minute or two late——late改latter,表示····时间之后
5.a little girl opened a bathroom door——第二个a改the,明显bathroom只有一个door,而且在前文我关上它的时候已经提到（I made my way the bathroom and closed the door before me）,所以用特指的the
6.I was stil sit——sit改sat,时态,过去时
7.Don't you know if ittle girls aren't supposed to——去掉if,根据语义：你不知道小女孩们是不应该······不需要if
8.The little was shocked by my being at there——去掉at,being there已经有在那里的意思,不需在加一个at（在）
9.She quick closed the door——quick改quickly快速地关上了门,修饰动作用副词
10.Most of the partygoer——partygoers,Most of······中的绝大部分,说明是复数,加s
第二篇：
1.Women are taking much more important part in——taking后加a,take a part in固定词组
2.Now women are worling like——like改as不是像书名一样工作,而是举例子,做如（as）······的工作
3.Almost all jobs that used to be done——used前加are,be used to be done曾经是被·····做的
4.Women are no longer looking down upon in society——looking改looked,be looked down upon是被看不起,而looking down upon是向下看到·······
5.As the changes in their social role——As改With,随着/因为有······（的发生）,as和with的用法要讲很麻烦,我讲得也许也不全面,你可以去别的地方查,我不多费笔墨
6.have been improve as well——improve改improved被提高,被动,要变为过去时形态
7.It's hard to find the wife is busy——find后加that,It's adj（形容词）that做······是······的,固定句式
8.a great number of man——man改men,a great number of大量的,复数
9.still guard his rights——his改their,前面说到是复数,所以这里要用their
10.few women are allowed attend important meetings——allowed后加to,be allowed to被允许做······固定词组
没什么大问题,还有不懂的可追问 第一篇：
1.We have a praty last sunday——have改had,时态错误,last sunday为过去时
2.I made my way the bathroom——way后加to,make one's way to someplace固定词组
3.I closed the door before me——before改behind根据语义“关上了·····的门”按逻辑应当是身后的门,而不是面前的门,不然我都还没进去呢.
4.A minute or two late——late改latter,表示····时间之后
5.a little girl opened a bathroom door——第二个a改the,明显bathroom只有一个door,而且在前文我关上它的时候已经提到（I made my way the bathroom and closed the door before me）,所以用特指的the
6.I was stil sit——sit改sat,时态,过去时
7.Don't you know if ittle girls aren't supposed to——去掉if,根据语义：你不知道小女孩们是不应该······不需要if
8.The little was shocked by my being at there——去掉at,being there已经有在那里的意思,不需在加一个at（在）
9.She quick closed the door——quick改quickly快速地关上了门,修饰动作用副词
10.Most of the partygoer——partygoers,Most of······中的绝大部分,说明是复数,加s
第二篇：
1.Women are taking much more important part in——taking后加a,take a part in固定词组
2.Now women are worling like——like改as不是像书名一样工作,而是举例子,做如（as）······的工作
3.Almost all jobs that used to be done——used前加are,be used to be done曾经是被·····做的
4.Women are no longer looking down upon in society——looking改looked,be looked down upon是被看不起,而looking down upon是向下看到·······
5.As the changes in their social role——As改With,随着/因为有······（的发生）,as和with的用法要讲很麻烦,我讲得也许也不全面,你可以去别的地方查,我不多费笔墨
6.have been improve as well——improve改improved被提高,被动,要变为过去时形态
7.It's hard to find the wife is busy——find后加that,It's adj（形容词）that做······是······的,固定句式
8.a great number of man——man改men,a great number of大量的,复数
9.still guard his rights——his改their,前面说到是复数,所以这里要用their
10.few women are allowed attend important meetings——allowed后加to,be allowed to被允许做······固定词组
没什么大问题,还有不懂的可追问