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一,If you have a love heart.love是动词,不能做定语.换成If you are kind-hearted,
二,you ought to join us表示建议把ought to 换成are supposed to 更委婉
三,We will look in the older those who live alone and talk with them.look in 表示调查,在这里不能用,此句话换成 We will go to show our kind heart to the old who live alone and talk with them.注意:those who 这个用法不对,定冠词the 和形容词连用表示一类人,所以直接用old就行了.
四,for example后面只能接一个名词,此处有三个并列名词,所以就用such as或for instance.
五,provide a opportunity to let you help the people.provide sth.for sb.to do sth.是固定搭配.所以此句应为:provide an opportunity for you to help the people.
六,improve your ability of action or talk.什么什么的能力应该用the ability to do sth.,ability 不能接of.此句应为improve your ability to act and talk.
七,with information attached.这句话我理解不了,要不就删了吧,好像不对.
八,don't hesitate,join us.don't hesitate to do sth.是固定搭配,所以应该是don't hesitate to join us.
你英语功底不够扎实,应该多背固定搭配,多背范文.
一,If you have a love heart.love是动词,不能做定语.换成If you are kind-hearted,
二,you ought to join us表示建议把ought to 换成are supposed to 更委婉
三,We will look in the older those who live alone and talk with them.look in 表示调查,在这里不能用,此句话换成 We will go to show our kind heart to the old who live alone and talk with them.注意:those who 这个用法不对,定冠词the 和形容词连用表示一类人,所以直接用old就行了.
四,for example后面只能接一个名词,此处有三个并列名词,所以就用such as或for instance.
五,provide a opportunity to let you help the people.provide sth.for sb.to do sth.是固定搭配.所以此句应为:provide an opportunity for you to help the people.
六,improve your ability of action or talk.什么什么的能力应该用the ability to do sth.,ability 不能接of.此句应为improve your ability to act and talk.
七,with information attached.这句话我理解不了,要不就删了吧,好像不对.
八,don't hesitate,join us.don't hesitate to do sth.是固定搭配,所以应该是don't hesitate to join us.
你英语功底不够扎实,应该多背固定搭配,多背范文.