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请根据写作要点和要求完成作文,并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置上.假设你是Li Shan,读了Stephen Williams的博客(blog)后,想在他的评论栏(Comments)分享自己的童年趣事.请根据以下写作要点,用英文写一篇短文.【写作要点】 事件 过"立夏"(Start of Summer)--中国二十四节气(solar term)之一 时间 六岁 地点 在乡下祖父母家 体验 人人吃茶叶蛋,希望生

2019-05-28

请根据写作要点和要求完成作文,并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置上.
假设你是Li Shan,读了Stephen Williams的博客(blog)后,想在他的评论栏(Comments)分享自己的童年趣事.请根据以下写作要点,用英文写一篇短文.
【写作要点】
事件 过"立夏"(Start of Summer)--中国二十四节气(solar term)之一
时间 六岁
地点 在乡下祖父母家
体验 人人吃茶叶蛋,希望生活幸福
奶奶把鸡蛋装在袋子里,挂在的哦胸(chest)前,以防止夏季疾病
玩撞鸡蛋的游戏,谁的鸡蛋不破,谁就赢
感受 有趣、难忘
…(请陈述1-2点)
【写作要求】
词数90左右;
短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
文中需包括所有写作要点,但不要逐字翻译,可适当加入过渡语句,使短文通顺、连贯;
不能照抄原文,文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称.
【评分标准】
语言规范,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯.
I still remember my experience of Start of Summer,one of the 24Chinese solar terms.

I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms!
Li Shan,China.___.
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I still remember my experience of Start of Summer,one of the 24 Chinese solar terms.I went to my grandparents'home in the country when I was six years old.【高分句型一,时间状语从句的使用】【要点一,时间地点】On the day of  Start of Summer,everyone ate tea eggs,wishing for a happy life and good health.My grandma hung an egg in a bag on my chest.She said that it could prevent summer diseases.What's more,we played a game of hitting eggs.If one's egg was not broken,he would win.【要点二,各个活动】And we enjoyed it very much.It was very interesting and unforgettable!I miss my grandparents and my childhood friends.I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms【高分句型二,注意宾语从句的使用】!【要点三,感受】
Li Shan,
China
I still remember my experience of Start of Summer,one of the 24 Chinese solar terms.I went to my grandparents'home in the country when I was six years old.【高分句型一,时间状语从句的使用】【要点一,时间地点】On the day of  Start of Summer,everyone ate tea eggs,wishing for a happy life and good health.My grandma hung an egg in a bag on my chest.She said that it could prevent summer diseases.What's more,we played a game of hitting eggs.If one's egg was not broken,he would win.【要点二,各个活动】And we enjoyed it very much.It was very interesting and unforgettable!I miss my grandparents and my childhood friends.I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms【高分句型二,注意宾语从句的使用】!【要点三,感受】
Li Shan,
China
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