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（In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, ) I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. When I have problems in my studies, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely and give me a warm hand when I am in trouble.. I will never forget the days when we play and study together.

Thank you very much, my parents , my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are all in good health and live a happy life.

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验 是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: I want to thank my parents. hey make me feel less lonely and give me a warm hand when I am in trouble. I hope you are all in good health and live a happy life.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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One possible version ：

（In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, ) I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. When I have problems in my studies, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely and give me a warm hand when I am in trouble.. I will never forget the days when we play and study together.

Thank you very much, my parents , my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are all in good health and live a happy life.

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验 是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: I want to thank my parents. hey make me feel less lonely and give me a warm hand when I am in trouble. I hope you are all in good health and live a happy life.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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