Hamlet（哈姆雷特）
Shakspere (wrong spelling) created Hamlet--a man with wisdom and courage .In order to revenge on his uncle for killing his father,he pretented (spelling mistake) to be mad and suffered a series of misery.On the contrary,we can also say that Hamlet is rude and selfish for he did not think twice before his revenge .if (Capitalize "If" since it is the beginning word of the sentence.) a country has no king,how can a country keep alive (You need a question mark here since it is a question.) So,every thing has two sides,the bright side and adumbral side.Every time we make a decision we have to think twice.
Comment:
Be careful with your spelling,grammar,and punctuation.Too many uncessary mistakes.
It is good that you looked at both the dark and bright sides of Hamlet.Thats quite objective and convincing. Hamlet（哈姆雷特）
Shakspere (wrong spelling) created Hamlet--a man with wisdom and courage .In order to revenge on his uncle for killing his father,he pretented (spelling mistake) to be mad and suffered a series of misery.On the contrary,we can also say that Hamlet is rude and selfish for he did not think twice before his revenge .if (Capitalize "If" since it is the beginning word of the sentence.) a country has no king,how can a country keep alive (You need a question mark here since it is a question.) So,every thing has two sides,the bright side and adumbral side.Every time we make a decision we have to think twice.
Comment:
Be careful with your spelling,grammar,and punctuation.Too many uncessary mistakes.
It is good that you looked at both the dark and bright sides of Hamlet.Thats quite objective and convincing.