This song is about a love story in which a girl who met a boy in her school and her dream about a love story between the boy and herself.In the story,she was Juliet and the boy was Romeo.They met in a ball and fell in love with each other at the first sight.However,Juliet's father kept her away from Romeo.Juliet asked Romeo to take her away from her boring life.She waited for Romeo,her prince,to come for her,but he never did.Finally,Juliet's father approved their relationship and Romeo proposed to Juliet in the blossom.The last line of the song takes audience back to the real world.
1.你原文用的时态都不一致,陈述故事内容的时候统一用过去式
2.keep Romeo from Juliet 改成keep Juliet from Romeo Juliet的父亲当然是keep Juliet,怎么会keep Romeo呢?!
3.同意一个relationship应该用动词approve,意思是“同意、批准”
4.歌曲中的“句子”不用sentense,用line
5.最后一句it describes the girl falls in love with the boy.被我删掉了,重复!
6.你第一句我也认为意思表达不清楚,到底歌曲讲的是一个爱情故事呢,还是讲的是Juliet做梦有这么一个爱情故事?语法已更正.
This is a great song because it describes a perfect romance that we all dream of.The real world is harsh and cruel,and things are not always perfect.We need a place to temporarily escape from imperfect reality.This song tells us a fairy tale that is full of happiness and love.As we listen to the song,it cheers us up and make us forget about all the bad things.
1.This song is important 不能仅仅因为这首曲子呈现了一个什么什么场景,就因此important,除非这首曲子在整个play或者整个故事的音乐中作为起作用的一部分时,才可以是“重要的”,这种情况下你可以说 This song is the key to the story because...
2.temporarily escape from imperfect reality 暂时地逃离不完美的现实世界
The major instrument used in the song is banjo.The classical sound it produces supports the story that the song tells.(This is a classical love story about Romeo and Juliet which took place long times ago.) Also,banjo is often used in country music.Since it has a smooth tone which best supports the first verse,it gives people a feeling of romance and peace.
1.括号中的一句已经修改过,语法正确,但最好全部删掉,对上下文没有作用. This song is about a love story in which a girl who met a boy in her school and her dream about a love story between the boy and herself.In the story,she was Juliet and the boy was Romeo.They met in a ball and fell in love with each other at the first sight.However,Juliet's father kept her away from Romeo.Juliet asked Romeo to take her away from her boring life.She waited for Romeo,her prince,to come for her,but he never did.Finally,Juliet's father approved their relationship and Romeo proposed to Juliet in the blossom.The last line of the song takes audience back to the real world.
1.你原文用的时态都不一致,陈述故事内容的时候统一用过去式
2.keep Romeo from Juliet 改成keep Juliet from Romeo Juliet的父亲当然是keep Juliet,怎么会keep Romeo呢?!
3.同意一个relationship应该用动词approve,意思是“同意、批准”
4.歌曲中的“句子”不用sentense,用line
5.最后一句it describes the girl falls in love with the boy.被我删掉了,重复!
6.你第一句我也认为意思表达不清楚,到底歌曲讲的是一个爱情故事呢,还是讲的是Juliet做梦有这么一个爱情故事?语法已更正.
This is a great song because it describes a perfect romance that we all dream of.The real world is harsh and cruel,and things are not always perfect.We need a place to temporarily escape from imperfect reality.This song tells us a fairy tale that is full of happiness and love.As we listen to the song,it cheers us up and make us forget about all the bad things.
1.This song is important 不能仅仅因为这首曲子呈现了一个什么什么场景,就因此important,除非这首曲子在整个play或者整个故事的音乐中作为起作用的一部分时,才可以是“重要的”,这种情况下你可以说 This song is the key to the story because...
2.temporarily escape from imperfect reality 暂时地逃离不完美的现实世界
The major instrument used in the song is banjo.The classical sound it produces supports the story that the song tells.(This is a classical love story about Romeo and Juliet which took place long times ago.) Also,banjo is often used in country music.Since it has a smooth tone which best supports the first verse,it gives people a feeling of romance and peace.
1.括号中的一句已经修改过,语法正确,但最好全部删掉,对上下文没有作用.