不唯一With the economic development of our country more and more students choose to go abroad for further study. This phenomenon has drawn great attention. Some people think it is great to study abroad.  If you go abroad you can expand your horizons and experience the local culture at the same time. Also you can make friends with more people. Above all you can master a foreign language more quickly if you live in a place where the language is widely spoken. Other people don't think it a good idea to go abroad. They think students who have language barrier may come across great difficulties in their study. And the expense for going abroad is too high. If you want to lower the expense by working part-time your study will be influenced.In my opinion going abroad for further study is a good choice for people who can afford it. But for those who are not rich enough they had better study here in China.
分 析：
先读提示，要点要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文训练任务。最后要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。
点评：
为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。

不唯一With the economic development of our country more and more students choose to go abroad for further study. This phenomenon has drawn great attention. Some people think it is great to study abroad.  If you go abroad you can expand your horizons and experience the local culture at the same time. Also you can make friends with more people. Above all you can master a foreign language more quickly if you live in a place where the language is widely spoken. Other people don't think it a good idea to go abroad. They think students who have language barrier may come across great difficulties in their study. And the expense for going abroad is too high. If you want to lower the expense by working part-time your study will be influenced.In my opinion going abroad for further study is a good choice for people who can afford it. But for those who are not rich enough they had better study here in China.
分 析：
先读提示，要点要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文训练任务。最后要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。
点评：
为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。