Your company/corporation is quite excellent and has made/achieved/got a perfect progress in this field during these decades.I hope/want/expect/desire to join (accede to) your team,contributing my share ( doing my bit for your company) (devoting my power/ability to your company) and then make no effort to your company's great-leap-forward development in the near future (in the decades) .In the meantime (meanwhile) ( At the same time) ,I also expect to deepen exchanges,facilitate communications and enhance ( strengthen) coporations between leaders and colleagues (co-workers).That is to say I need to
establish a good future-oriented subordinate relationship with leaders,and (as well as可以省略)a good partnership with colleagues.
个人觉得最后一句话过于累赘.当然只是个人观点. Your company/corporation is quite excellent and has made/achieved/got a perfect progress in this field during these decades.I hope/want/expect/desire to join (accede to) your team,contributing my share ( doing my bit for your company) (devoting my power/ability to your company) and then make no effort to your company's great-leap-forward development in the near future (in the decades) .In the meantime (meanwhile) ( At the same time) ,I also expect to deepen exchanges,facilitate communications and enhance ( strengthen) coporations between leaders and colleagues (co-workers).That is to say I need to
establish a good future-oriented subordinate relationship with leaders,and (as well as可以省略)a good partnership with colleagues.
个人觉得最后一句话过于累赘.当然只是个人观点.