原文
What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It’s a brief or excellent article about credit cards.The author explains what credit cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it.American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.However,the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world.The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.
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What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It’s a brief or excellent article about credit cards.The author explains what credit cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it.American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.However,the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world.The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.
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or--and/but
what--how
aspect--aspects
it--them
mostly--most
are--is
in world--in the world
making--made
pay for--pay
protected--protects