One possible version Dear Miss Li I'm one of your students in Class Six Senior Three. Nowadays I find it difficult to learn English well. I find our texts full of new words that are hard for me to remember and grammar is not easy to understand. What's worse I can't improve my writing no matter how hard I practise. Faced with so much difficulty I have to ask you for some advice. Would you like to introduce me to some good ways to learn new words? In the meanwhile I hope you can teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also I would like to learn some rules and methods to learn grammar in order to improve my writing. I believe I can make great progress in my English study with your help. Thank you. Yours sincerely Wang Min
One possible version Dear Miss Li I'm one of your students in Class Six Senior Three. Nowadays I find it difficult to learn English well. I find our texts full of new words that are hard for me to remember and grammar is not easy to understand. What's worse I can't improve my writing no matter how hard I practise. Faced with so much difficulty I have to ask you for some advice. Would you like to introduce me to some good ways to learn new words? In the meanwhile I hope you can teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also I would like to learn some rules and methods to learn grammar in order to improve my writing. I believe I can make great progress in my English study with your help. Thank you. Yours sincerely Wang Min