Dear Mr. Black，How are you doing?I’m glad that there will be some new columns in our English website. Of the four columns I have higher expectation to Today’s World. As you know today’s world is a changing world. We’ll become outdated if we turn deaf ear to it. From the new column Today’s World we can learn what’s going on around the world. It can also enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.As to suggestion I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website. Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well but short of learning chances after class. I hope our website can do something about it.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua

分 析：
考查半开放性作文。半开放性作文留给考生发挥的空间比较大。一般只提供一个话题或一个图片，要求考生合理地进行想象。考生在写作时，需要做到以下几点：第一、认真审题，把握所有信息。第二、确定体裁，把握行文格式。第三、罗列提纲，思考表达方式。第四、 组织语言，展开写作。 写作时，运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等；要尽量运用多样化的句式，注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合；要注意上下文的衔接，过渡要自然。第五、 认真检查，查漏补缺。 本篇文章需要分两段，一段写最喜欢的栏目及理由、还有一段写自己的意见或建议。还需要选择恰当的连接词，使文章更连贯。
【亮点说明】本篇习作要点齐全、结构紧凑，而且使用了大量的短语，如have higher expectation to、turn deaf ear to、the latest science and technology、would appreciate it if等等，使得文章语言更加连贯，意思更明确。此外，文章还运用了多种句式和结构，比如As you know today’s world is a changing world.是定语从句，还有we can learn what’s going on around the world.是宾语从句。
考点：
考查半开放性作文 考点
分析：
考点1：图画作文 试题属性 题型： 难度： 考核： 年级

Dear Mr. Black，How are you doing?I’m glad that there will be some new columns in our English website. Of the four columns I have higher expectation to Today’s World. As you know today’s world is a changing world. We’ll become outdated if we turn deaf ear to it. From the new column Today’s World we can learn what’s going on around the world. It can also enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.As to suggestion I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website. Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well but short of learning chances after class. I hope our website can do something about it.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua

分 析：
考查半开放性作文。半开放性作文留给考生发挥的空间比较大。一般只提供一个话题或一个图片，要求考生合理地进行想象。考生在写作时，需要做到以下几点：第一、认真审题，把握所有信息。第二、确定体裁，把握行文格式。第三、罗列提纲，思考表达方式。第四、 组织语言，展开写作。 写作时，运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等；要尽量运用多样化的句式，注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合；要注意上下文的衔接，过渡要自然。第五、 认真检查，查漏补缺。 本篇文章需要分两段，一段写最喜欢的栏目及理由、还有一段写自己的意见或建议。还需要选择恰当的连接词，使文章更连贯。
【亮点说明】本篇习作要点齐全、结构紧凑，而且使用了大量的短语，如have higher expectation to、turn deaf ear to、the latest science and technology、would appreciate it if等等，使得文章语言更加连贯，意思更明确。此外，文章还运用了多种句式和结构，比如As you know today’s world is a changing world.是定语从句，还有we can learn what’s going on around the world.是宾语从句。
考点：
考查半开放性作文 考点
分析：
考点1：图画作文 试题属性 题型： 难度： 考核： 年级