It is fully justified that some people consider it in three related fields.At first place,the very short career of sports decide the high salary to sports professionals.
第一个短句和第二个短句之间用了逗号,但是没有关联词,所以使用错误,可以用that 把它们连接.
第二个短句中说了“three related fields”,即三个相关的领域,但是第三个短句只说了其中一个,所以两个句子之间不能用冒号.冒号改为句号. It is fully justified that some people consider it in three related fields.At first place,the very short career of sports decide the high salary to sports professionals.
第一个短句和第二个短句之间用了逗号,但是没有关联词,所以使用错误,可以用that 把它们连接.
第二个短句中说了“three related fields”,即三个相关的领域,但是第三个短句只说了其中一个,所以两个句子之间不能用冒号.冒号改为句号.