Dear（同桌名）：
Get along with you,I find that you have some bad faults.Although these are minor mistakes,but it will cause unnecessary trouble.I hope you can get the wrong,it will change is the correct.
You only get the wrong,you can make more perfect.I hope you don't be a mistake in the wrong.
Best wishes.
yours
×××
没有说是什么错误呀 不怎么好写 Dear（同桌名）：
Get along with you,I find that you have some bad faults.Although these are minor mistakes,but it will cause unnecessary trouble.I hope you can get the wrong,it will change is the correct.
You only get the wrong,you can make more perfect.I hope you don't be a mistake in the wrong.
Best wishes.
yours
×××
没有说是什么错误呀 不怎么好写