你真是有自知之明.喜欢你的虚心态度.
这封信总的来说还是不错的,主要是须注意英语表达往往没有那么直接,像教训孩子或中国学生似的.尤其是“Do you understand?”是很伤人的,很可能会造成反作用.可改写得婉转含蓄些,最好署名前还要加习惯的礼貌说法,且一般不自称自己的衔头.另外,从第三句起,开始有一些语法错误,请逐一比较,以后纠正.
Dear Cathy,
It was wonderful to learn that your family are busy and your children are great though I really worried your children's health.Perhaps you could give them less pressure and more free time to relax.Everyone will feel tried sometimes.We all need some free time to do the things we want.
Yours sincerely,
Alice Green 你真是有自知之明.喜欢你的虚心态度.
这封信总的来说还是不错的,主要是须注意英语表达往往没有那么直接,像教训孩子或中国学生似的.尤其是“Do you understand?”是很伤人的,很可能会造成反作用.可改写得婉转含蓄些,最好署名前还要加习惯的礼貌说法,且一般不自称自己的衔头.另外,从第三句起,开始有一些语法错误,请逐一比较,以后纠正.
Dear Cathy,
It was wonderful to learn that your family are busy and your children are great though I really worried your children's health.Perhaps you could give them less pressure and more free time to relax.Everyone will feel tried sometimes.We all need some free time to do the things we want.
Yours sincerely,
Alice Green