你把楼上的时态要换成过去式的!
That day, I went to school early and sat on the seat did some reading, suddenly, I heard a girl loudly crying: "really?" The students began to stir. I looked over there with curiousness.Some students were around the corner,and i fuzzily heared a boy talking about ghosts, zombies. Because I'm interest in things like these, I couldn't help to listen to him with others.The boy said with a low voice: "in our village there was an old house, when the evening came,a crying voice would be there,and I felt very terrible when I wnt across it." Another boy asked: "So what did you do then?" He said: "I went home straight,without a look" . I listened to the story with a cold feeling on my back. I may foget that in the datlight ,but most terrible thing happened after the night class.
That day, I went to school early and sat on the seat did some reading, suddenly, I heard a girl loudly crying: "really?" The students began to stir. I looked over there with curiousness.Some students were around the corner,and i fuzzily heared a boy talking about ghosts, zombies. Because I'm interest in things like these, I couldn't help to listen to him with others.The boy said with a low voice: "in our village there was an old house, when the evening came,a crying voice would be there,and I felt very terrible when I wnt across it." Another boy asked: "So what did you do then?" He said: "I went home straight,without a look" . I listened to the story with a cold feeling on my back. I may foget that in the datlight ,but most terrible thing happened after the night school.
After school,about 9'o clock ,I had to go home through a bamboo forest alone. And not far away from the road ,there was a wood. Suddenly, I heard somebody crying and winds blowing on bamboo leaves.Then I remembered the words my classmates said that day.Immediately I went home straightly in a hurry,without stopping.
I cried in front of my house,because my familly may spend some time to get down stairs to open the door for me ,it seemed like a few centuries passed.My family opened the door and saw me crying,so they asked me,"what happened?" I told them, they comforted me: "that was just the voice of cats, there is no ghosts in the world, don't be afraid!" Although noting happened after that, however, I dare not stay in the bamboo forest again ,and after night schlool,I began go back with my famillys' accompany.
That's really unforgettable, even now I write it down, I'm a little afraid.Maybe that's just a cat,or somewhat's crying,anything in the world, who knows? 你把楼上的时态要换成过去式的!
That day, I went to school early and sat on the seat did some reading, suddenly, I heard a girl loudly crying: "really?" The students began to stir. I looked over there with curiousness.Some students were around the corner,and i fuzzily heared a boy talking about ghosts, zombies. Because I'm interest in things like these, I couldn't help to listen to him with others.The boy said with a low voice: "in our village there was an old house, when the evening came,a crying voice would be there,and I felt very terrible when I wnt across it." Another boy asked: "So what did you do then?" He said: "I went home straight,without a look" . I listened to the story with a cold feeling on my back. I may foget that in the datlight ,but most terrible thing happened after the night class.
That day, I went to school early and sat on the seat did some reading, suddenly, I heard a girl loudly crying: "really?" The students began to stir. I looked over there with curiousness.Some students were around the corner,and i fuzzily heared a boy talking about ghosts, zombies. Because I'm interest in things like these, I couldn't help to listen to him with others.The boy said with a low voice: "in our village there was an old house, when the evening came,a crying voice would be there,and I felt very terrible when I wnt across it." Another boy asked: "So what did you do then?" He said: "I went home straight,without a look" . I listened to the story with a cold feeling on my back. I may foget that in the datlight ,but most terrible thing happened after the night school.
After school,about 9'o clock ,I had to go home through a bamboo forest alone. And not far away from the road ,there was a wood. Suddenly, I heard somebody crying and winds blowing on bamboo leaves.Then I remembered the words my classmates said that day.Immediately I went home straightly in a hurry,without stopping.
I cried in front of my house,because my familly may spend some time to get down stairs to open the door for me ,it seemed like a few centuries passed.My family opened the door and saw me crying,so they asked me,"what happened?" I told them, they comforted me: "that was just the voice of cats, there is no ghosts in the world, don't be afraid!" Although noting happened after that, however, I dare not stay in the bamboo forest again ,and after night schlool,I began go back with my famillys' accompany.
That's really unforgettable, even now I write it down, I'm a little afraid.Maybe that's just a cat,or somewhat's crying,anything in the world, who knows?