很多问题.有拼写错误,语法错误,还有不符合英文习惯的句型.这些我都给你改了.另外你的文章本身也有问题,没有把你要说的意思讲清楚,如高考的坏处是什么.通篇看到的,是高考的好处.这个需要你自己改,不然就成了我给你代写了.另外你也没提出解决办法,而只是讲了别人如何绕开高考（明白这两者之间的区别么?）.
In china, I think the most serious problem is in education, specifically the university entrance exam.
In 2012, 300 thousand students took part in the university entrance exam. Despite an overall rate of passing of 75%, only a small fraction of people were able to go to the top schools which are called "211project" and "985 project" schools and represent the top level in the nation, similar to the Ivy League Universities in the US.
To achieve the goal of going to the top universities, high school students attend a variaty of tutorials to learn marth, english, physics and other topics. At the same time, parents prefer that their children also study during weekends. For example, my aunt generously paid 100 yuan per hour for a tutorial class in order to improve her son's grade. At school, teachers also demand that stuents work hard. In fact, students have little free time to do any other things except to study in high school.
We cannot stop thinking about the reason why situation has become like this. Maybe the reason is that studying is the only way to make one successful according to chinese view. If you do not work hard, you will fall behind.
Finally, how can the problem be solved? In fact, many teenagers are sent aboard to escape the chinese university entance exam in recent years. On the other hand, the government has put a new policy into practice called independent recruitment. The headmaster of the college will interview the student. If he or she performs well enough, he or she can attend the university without exam. 很多问题.有拼写错误,语法错误,还有不符合英文习惯的句型.这些我都给你改了.另外你的文章本身也有问题,没有把你要说的意思讲清楚,如高考的坏处是什么.通篇看到的,是高考的好处.这个需要你自己改,不然就成了我给你代写了.另外你也没提出解决办法,而只是讲了别人如何绕开高考（明白这两者之间的区别么?）.
In china, I think the most serious problem is in education, specifically the university entrance exam.
In 2012, 300 thousand students took part in the university entrance exam. Despite an overall rate of passing of 75%, only a small fraction of people were able to go to the top schools which are called "211project" and "985 project" schools and represent the top level in the nation, similar to the Ivy League Universities in the US.
To achieve the goal of going to the top universities, high school students attend a variaty of tutorials to learn marth, english, physics and other topics. At the same time, parents prefer that their children also study during weekends. For example, my aunt generously paid 100 yuan per hour for a tutorial class in order to improve her son's grade. At school, teachers also demand that stuents work hard. In fact, students have little free time to do any other things except to study in high school.
We cannot stop thinking about the reason why situation has become like this. Maybe the reason is that studying is the only way to make one successful according to chinese view. If you do not work hard, you will fall behind.
Finally, how can the problem be solved? In fact, many teenagers are sent aboard to escape the chinese university entance exam in recent years. On the other hand, the government has put a new policy into practice called independent recruitment. The headmaster of the college will interview the student. If he or she performs well enough, he or she can attend the university without exam.