【求助~!】2011辽宁高考英语作文估分 So I want to apply for the job. I'm Li Hua , a girl of 20 years old. In july, I will be gratuated from Xinxing foreign language school .In the school, I study very hard and do exactly well in the e
2019-04-30
【求助~!】2011辽宁高考英语作文估分 So I want to apply for the job. I'm Li Hua , a girl of 20 years old. In july, I will be gratuated from Xinxing foreign language school .In the school, I study very hard and do exactly well in the exams. And I'm fluent in the spoken English.
Also, I have a wide range of interests in singing, dancing and so on .And I have a good knowledge in the computer.
I'm an out-going girl who can make friends with others naturally .What's more, I'm always enthusiastic about the job .If i get the chance to be accepted, I willl make efforts to be the best.
我平时考试作文分是18到19 . 请大家能耐心细心地看完~~因为这是要给估分作参考的~!希望能对作文给一些点评~!
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大概18左右,因为文中有些地方不是很好,如will be gratuated from ,have a good knowledge in the computer等,还有结尾应该加上期望得到你们的答复这类的句子
大概18左右,因为文中有些地方不是很好,如will be gratuated from ,have a good knowledge in the computer等,还有结尾应该加上期望得到你们的答复这类的句子