Dear Margaret，
I am Li Ming，a student in the class．I am writing to tell you about our English learning．（点明主旨）At present，we have a lot of written work to do．Also，we speak too much Chinese in class，which doesn't help a lot．（高分句型）And we are learning too much grammar．It's just difficult and boring．Besides，we don't like copying texts，either．（现状）So 1 hope in your class，we can have more activities like discussion or role playing．Don't you think they will help to practice speaking English？（高分句型）And we'll be happy if we can learn some English songs or watch English movies．（期望）
Looking forward to a big change in our class．（结束语）
Yours．
Li Ming Dear Margaret，
I am Li Ming，a student in the class．I am writing to tell you about our English learning．（点明主旨）At present，we have a lot of written work to do．Also，we speak too much Chinese in class，which doesn't help a lot．（高分句型）And we are learning too much grammar．It's just difficult and boring．Besides，we don't like copying texts，either．（现状）So 1 hope in your class，we can have more activities like discussion or role playing．Don't you think they will help to practice speaking English？（高分句型）And we'll be happy if we can learn some English songs or watch English movies．（期望）
Looking forward to a big change in our class．（结束语）
Yours．
Li Ming