Recent yeats have witnessed a growing number of up to 12 million children in China getting more and more overweight．（描述现状）
When it comes to the obesity problem，the reasons are not far to seek．One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it．【高分句型一】Another factor to mention is children's lack of exercise in everyday life．A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than work our regularly．【高分句型二】To make matters worse，the fact that many children stay up late into night also contributes to the problem．（说明原因）
Personally I believe it is ggreat importance to keep a balance diet，which guarantees proper nutrition in ou body．What's more，a healthy life style is the key to a happy life．It is a healthy body and mind that really matters in promising  us a brighter future after all．（提出建议） Recent yeats have witnessed a growing number of up to 12 million children in China getting more and more overweight．（描述现状）
When it comes to the obesity problem，the reasons are not far to seek．One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it．【高分句型一】Another factor to mention is children's lack of exercise in everyday life．A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than work our regularly．【高分句型二】To make matters worse，the fact that many children stay up late into night also contributes to the problem．（说明原因）
Personally I believe it is ggreat importance to keep a balance diet，which guarantees proper nutrition in ou body．What's more，a healthy life style is the key to a happy life．It is a healthy body and mind that really matters in promising  us a brighter future after all．（提出建议）