关于买东西的英语作文,我买了一个相机坏了去找售后要求退款一类的,作文不要对话形式,急,不用很复杂,
2019-06-15
关于买东西的英语作文,我买了一个相机坏了去找售后要求退款一类的,作文不要对话形式,急,
不用很复杂,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request for a full refund of the camera-Canon650D I phurchased on Nov 12, 2012 from the XX District Branch Store. (交待写信目的,购买的商品型号,时间,地点)The camera was great when you showed to me in your store, but the one I received was scratched on the lens with a broken shouler strap. What's worst, the camera cannot work as the screen is blur and blue. Besides, the extra battery You shop promised free is not inside the package. (点明退货原因,镜头刮花,肩带破损,屏幕蓝点)
I really like your great service in the store, but the goods is a little lower than my expectation. (先给糖后打一棒子,英语公关类书写中也有委婉语这一要求）You have mentioned a 7-day validity for exchanging or refund unqulified quality, so I would appreciate it if You Store could offer me a refund.（再一次理直气壮点明原因）
I am looking forward to your prompt reply.
Thanks!
Yours Sincerely,
XX
英语公关文写作目的在于沟通,最和谐的方式达到自己的要求.切忌言辞粗暴,语气不善,这道理跟在中国你跟人要求某事一样,你若一味说人不好,对方也不会如你所愿.作为参考咯
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request for a full refund of the camera-Canon650D I phurchased on Nov 12, 2012 from the XX District Branch Store. (交待写信目的,购买的商品型号,时间,地点)The camera was great when you showed to me in your store, but the one I received was scratched on the lens with a broken shouler strap. What's worst, the camera cannot work as the screen is blur and blue. Besides, the extra battery You shop promised free is not inside the package. (点明退货原因,镜头刮花,肩带破损,屏幕蓝点)
I really like your great service in the store, but the goods is a little lower than my expectation. (先给糖后打一棒子,英语公关类书写中也有委婉语这一要求）You have mentioned a 7-day validity for exchanging or refund unqulified quality, so I would appreciate it if You Store could offer me a refund.（再一次理直气壮点明原因）
I am looking forward to your prompt reply.
Thanks!
Yours Sincerely,
XX
英语公关文写作目的在于沟通,最和谐的方式达到自己的要求.切忌言辞粗暴,语气不善,这道理跟在中国你跟人要求某事一样,你若一味说人不好,对方也不会如你所愿.作为参考咯