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帮忙修改作文在线等!谢谢!I have been to USA two times. First time I went to USA happened when I was thirteen. And this summer I went to USA again.In 2006, I went to a high school in New York, we had 29 persons, and we played with some students who study in that high

2019-05-29

帮忙修改作文在线等!谢谢!
I have been to USA two times. First time I went to USA happened when I was thirteen. And this summer I went to USA again.
In 2006, I went to a high school in New York, we had 29 persons, and we played with some students who study in that high school. We stayed there 19 days, had lot of fun with American students.
We went to countryside, and we trained teamwork at there. Every morning we had two guys had to made breakfast for all students and teachers. And then, we divided into three groups to take wire-walking trained. First, we should climbed the peak, next we through it one by one. To be honest, it was very scared me, because I had acrophobia. But all students through it very quickly, so I had no way to escape. But after did that, I got brave a lot.
When we finished one day trained, we had four guys to cleaned kitchen and bathroom. Then we sat outside, played some interesting games or lie down on the grass, looked at the sky.
I remembered, one of the most exciting trained was climbed mountain. Because that mountain we climbed were not exploit by people. In the mountain, had some animals like snake, squirrel, and also had lot of insects.
On the half way, when I pass a rivulet, unfortunately, I bite by a snake, hit the target unfortunate grate fortunate that was a grass snake.
The seven days in countryside we learned lot of things about teamwork from students, teachers. And also we made lot of friends in New York. In my mind, that was a exciting and interesting experience I never had.
那个是希望能帮忙改进一下让它显得更好一点。谢谢!
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I have been to USA two times.First time I went to there at the age of 13.And this summer I paied a visit to USA again.
In 2006,I went to a high school which is consisted of 29 persons in New Yorkwe .We stayed there 19 days and everyone have a good time get together.
We went to countryside and trained teamwork at there.Every morning we had two guys to made breakfast for all students and teachers.And then,we are divided into three groups to take wire-walking trained.First,we should climb the peak,next we got through it one by one.To be honest,it was very scared to me,because I have the sense of acrophobia.But all students got through it very quickly that give me courage ,and after doing that,I got brave a lot.
When we finished one day training,four guys lived to clean the kitchen and bathroom.Then we went outside,played some interesting games or lie down on the grass,looked at the sky.
I remembered,one of the most exciting trained was climbed mountain.Because that mountain we climbed were not exploit by people.In the mountain,had some animals like snake,squirrel,and also had lot of insects.
On the half way,when I pass a rivulet,unfortunately,I bite by a snake,hit the target unfortunate grate fortunate that was a grass snake.
The seven days in countryside we learned lot of things about teamwork from students,teachers.And also we made lot of friends in New York.In my mind,that was a exciting and interesting experience I never had.
at the age of 岁数 went to改成pay a visit to USA 楼下错误 time 表示次数是可以用s的 改好的
I have been to USA two times.First time I went to there at the age of 13.And this summer I paied a visit to USA again.
In 2006,I went to a high school which is consisted of 29 persons in New Yorkwe .We stayed there 19 days and everyone have a good time get together.
We went to countryside and trained teamwork at there.Every morning we had two guys to made breakfast for all students and teachers.And then,we are divided into three groups to take wire-walking trained.First,we should climb the peak,next we got through it one by one.To be honest,it was very scared to me,because I have the sense of acrophobia.But all students got through it very quickly that give me courage ,and after doing that,I got brave a lot.
When we finished one day training,four guys lived to clean the kitchen and bathroom.Then we went outside,played some interesting games or lie down on the grass,looked at the sky.
I remembered,one of the most exciting trained was climbed mountain.Because that mountain we climbed were not exploit by people.In the mountain,had some animals like snake,squirrel,and also had lot of insects.
On the half way,when I pass a rivulet,unfortunately,I bite by a snake,hit the target unfortunate grate fortunate that was a grass snake.
The seven days in countryside we learned lot of things about teamwork from students,teachers.And also we made lot of friends in New York.In my mind,that was a exciting and interesting experience I never had.
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