I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I didn’t enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoying. Second, the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly bear it. the EXIT sings could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

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I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I didn’t enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoying. Second, the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly bear it. the EXIT sings could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

略