Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to learn part-time tutors are wanted in your training school for the coming summer camp and I’d like to have a try.
I’m a student who is to graduate from high school soon. I do very well in my English lessons, especially in speaking and listening, with the ability to communicate. Besides, I’m monitor and often help others with their English. Before going to university, I will have a long holiday, during which I’m determined to do a part-time job like this to make the best of it. What’s more, I can earn some money as well as practice for my future studies. Last but not least, I can get some valuable social experience. I’m going to work hard at my job and I can also be a head teacher. I hope I will have a chance to co-operate with you.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to learn part-time tutors are wanted in your training school for the coming summer camp and I’d like to have a try.
I’m a student who is to graduate from high school soon. I do very well in my English lessons, especially in speaking and listening, with the ability to communicate. Besides, I’m monitor and often help others with their English. Before going to university, I will have a long holiday, during which I’m determined to do a part-time job like this to make the best of it. What’s more, I can earn some money as well as practice for my future studies. Last but not least, I can get some valuable social experience. I’m going to work hard at my job and I can also be a head teacher. I hope I will have a chance to co-operate with you.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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