我是初三的学生,这是我月考的一篇英语作文,只得了九分,宜昌市刚刚被评为“全国文明城市”,成为湖北省唯一的全国文明城.作为中学生,在日常生活中,我们该怎样做“文明小市民”?请写一篇短文谈谈具体的文明行为和你的感想.要求1,要点包含文明交通,环境保护和其他文明表现;2,内容完整,书写整齐.词数80-100 提示词：civilized,文明的In yichang ,It is very important for us to be a civilized people ,Now Yi Chang is call
2019-04-17
我是初三的学生,这是我月考的一篇英语作文,只得了九分,
宜昌市刚刚被评为“全国文明城市”,成为湖北省唯一的全国文明城.作为中学生,在日常生活中,我们该怎样做“文明小市民”?请写一篇短文谈谈具体的文明行为和你的感想.
要求1,要点包含文明交通,环境保护和其他文明表现;
2,内容完整,书写整齐.词数80-100 提示词：civilized,文明的
In yichang ,It is very important for us to be a civilized people ,Now Yi Chang is called "China polite city"everyone was excited .If you want to be a civilized people,you should do something .and more,the are very important for everyone.
First ,civilized traffic ,you should be 'red light stop ,green light go"and do not through the road ,second ,we should plant a lot of trees in the city ,Third ,we should not sleep on the street ,do not throw the rubbish on the road .do not fight with other people and talking with people politely ,like "How do you do ",“How are you " ,Excuse me ”
and more ,these are very important for everyone
优质解答
.首先,同学,我必须说,你的作文太过“中式英语”了.
Now Yi Chang is called "China polite city"everyone was excited 这句是“宜昌被评为中国文明城市,使得大家都很高兴.”那么连词呢?应为“Now Yi Chang is called 'National Civilized City' so that everyone is excited. “前后时态要一致呀!为什么前面用现在时后面就变过去时了呢?
,you should do something .and more,the are very important for everyone.
“你应该做些什么,因为对每个人都很重要.”You should do something because being civilized is important to everyone.
First ,civilized traffic ,you should be 'red light stop 这句真的不能这么说.不是你中文想成什么样,英文就可以直接翻译的.First,for being civilized when you cross the road,you should stop until the green light on.
记住,说“第一,第二,第三”时,都重新起一句,然后大写.
剩下的自己再修改一下吧,语法基础薄弱,自己看看书加强哟!
.首先,同学,我必须说,你的作文太过“中式英语”了.
Now Yi Chang is called "China polite city"everyone was excited 这句是“宜昌被评为中国文明城市,使得大家都很高兴.”那么连词呢?应为“Now Yi Chang is called 'National Civilized City' so that everyone is excited. “前后时态要一致呀!为什么前面用现在时后面就变过去时了呢?
,you should do something .and more,the are very important for everyone.
“你应该做些什么,因为对每个人都很重要.”You should do something because being civilized is important to everyone.
First ,civilized traffic ,you should be 'red light stop 这句真的不能这么说.不是你中文想成什么样,英文就可以直接翻译的.First,for being civilized when you cross the road,you should stop until the green light on.
记住,说“第一,第二,第三”时,都重新起一句,然后大写.
剩下的自己再修改一下吧,语法基础薄弱,自己看看书加强哟!