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你校英语社团将要排演英语话剧Sound of Music,需要一些演员。请你根据以下提示,向国际部的学生发出口头通知,内容包括: 报名时间:本周五之前报名地点:教学楼221室 报名条件:1.英语口语流利; 2.喜爱话剧表演;3.乐于与他人合作。 注意:1.词数不少于50。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。 Good morning everyone. May I have your attention please? Thanks for your att

2019-04-18

你校英语社团将要排演英语话剧Sound of Music,需要一些演员。请你根据以下提示,向国际部的学生发出口头通知,内容包括:

报名时间:本周五之前报名地点:教学楼221室

报名条件:1.英语口语流利; 2.喜爱话剧表演;3.乐于与他人合作。

注意:1.词数不少于50。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Good morning everyone. May I have your attention please?

Thanks for your attention.

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One possible version:Good morning everyone. May I have your attention please? Here is an announcement from English Club. We need some actors and actresses for the English play "Sound of Music". If you love acting and are willing to work with others you are the right person we are looking for. Of course fluency in spoken English is required.Can't wait to join in it? Just come to Room 221 0f the teaching building by this Friday and sign up!Thanks for your attention.

分 析:
本文是篇材料作文,内容要求学生写一篇口头通知,一般用一般现在时,多用第一,第二人称。注意衔接合理,还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。还注意口头通知的习惯用语。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确,思路清晰。在注意内容的同时,注意应用习惯用语,较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如Of course Can't wait to join in it? Thanks for your attention. If you love acting and are willing to work with others you are the right person we are looking for.等等。
考点:
提纲作文。
One possible version:Good morning everyone. May I have your attention please? Here is an announcement from English Club. We need some actors and actresses for the English play "Sound of Music". If you love acting and are willing to work with others you are the right person we are looking for. Of course fluency in spoken English is required.Can't wait to join in it? Just come to Room 221 0f the teaching building by this Friday and sign up!Thanks for your attention.

分 析:
本文是篇材料作文,内容要求学生写一篇口头通知,一般用一般现在时,多用第一,第二人称。注意衔接合理,还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。还注意口头通知的习惯用语。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确,思路清晰。在注意内容的同时,注意应用习惯用语,较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如Of course Can't wait to join in it? Thanks for your attention. If you love acting and are willing to work with others you are the right person we are looking for.等等。
考点:
提纲作文。
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