英语基础写作假设你叫李华,最近在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子,但出现r一些问题。 [写作内容] 请给网站写一封投诉信,包括以下内容: l.写信的目的;2.投诉内容: 申购情况 实际情况颜色 黑色 白色号数 9 8.5到货日期 4月10日 4月20日 3.要求:重新邮寄或退款; 4.询问:若寄回,谁承担奇费? [写作要求] 只能使用5个句了表达全部内容。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入句子总数。) [评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
2019-05-27
英语基础写作
假设你叫李华,最近在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子,但出现r一些问题。 [写作内容]
请给网站写一封投诉信,包括以下内容:
l.写信的目的;
2.投诉内容:
申购情况 实际情况
颜色 黑色 白色
号数 9 8.5
到货日期 4月10日 4月20日
3.要求:重新邮寄或退款;
4.询问:若寄回,谁承担奇费?
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句了表达全部内容。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入句子总数。)
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Dear Sir.
Thank you for your consideration
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这篇短文不是根据问题回答的, 更不是一封信。 改正, 重新写一封投诉信。更改如下: Dear Sir, I’m Leehua who has bought a pair of shoes (code T001) which are black and white with the size of 9 / 8.5 from Ebay. (例子:T001= 购买的货号, Ebay =购物网站的名字). The payment of the shoes is done by tele-transfering USD 20 from Shanghai Bank on 4th April 2010. The goods are delivered to me on 10th April / 20th April 2010 but they are not the same as what I had bought. I request Sir to resend the shoes or refund besides stating clearly the party who shall be responsible for the courier charges. Thank you for your consideration.
这篇短文不是根据问题回答的, 更不是一封信。 改正, 重新写一封投诉信。更改如下: Dear Sir, I’m Leehua who has bought a pair of shoes (code T001) which are black and white with the size of 9 / 8.5 from Ebay. (例子:T001= 购买的货号, Ebay =购物网站的名字). The payment of the shoes is done by tele-transfering USD 20 from Shanghai Bank on 4th April 2010. The goods are delivered to me on 10th April / 20th April 2010 but they are not the same as what I had bought. I request Sir to resend the shoes or refund besides stating clearly the party who shall be responsible for the courier charges. Thank you for your consideration.