Dear Mike How are you? I am writing this letter to you to introduce one day of mine. Every day I get up early then I will have my breakfast at 7:00 I always like to have an egg a cup of milk and a piece of bread. I think it is very heathy. After that I will go to school.My class begins at 8:00 I am never late. Math is very useful in our daily life I like it but there is a problem with my Enlish it is a little bit difficult for me could you help me solve it? I love Chinese it's an interesting class. Can you guess what is my favourite class? Of course it is P.E I love sports it's amazing class making me full of energy. As a boy I think PE is easy. At 12:00 all my classes are over I have one hour to have lunch I like vegetables such as potato carrot of course I have the important food——rice. From 1:30 to 3:30 I have art lesson It also makes me feel relaxed because this class is very simple and I love drawing beautiful things.That is my life how about yours ? I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishes.Yours Jack

分 析：
要求学生能熟练运用英语，介绍自己的初中学校，课程设置，个人的爱好，对课程的感受这四个方面来书写。
【 亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。本文完全按照题目要求，准确定位的写出所要求的四个方面。按照时间顺序，逻辑思路清晰，条理清楚，疑问句与肯定句参用，How are you? That is my life how about yours ?句式多样;灵活的运用了宾语从句 I think it is very heathy. Can you guess what is my favourite class?非谓语writing this letter to you to introduce making me full of …makes me feel relaxed和经典的短语get up early a cup of milk ;in our daily life have lunch such as; feel relaxed; looking forward to等等。

Dear Mike How are you? I am writing this letter to you to introduce one day of mine. Every day I get up early then I will have my breakfast at 7:00 I always like to have an egg a cup of milk and a piece of bread. I think it is very heathy. After that I will go to school.My class begins at 8:00 I am never late. Math is very useful in our daily life I like it but there is a problem with my Enlish it is a little bit difficult for me could you help me solve it? I love Chinese it's an interesting class. Can you guess what is my favourite class? Of course it is P.E I love sports it's amazing class making me full of energy. As a boy I think PE is easy. At 12:00 all my classes are over I have one hour to have lunch I like vegetables such as potato carrot of course I have the important food——rice. From 1:30 to 3:30 I have art lesson It also makes me feel relaxed because this class is very simple and I love drawing beautiful things.That is my life how about yours ? I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishes.Yours Jack

分 析：
要求学生能熟练运用英语，介绍自己的初中学校，课程设置，个人的爱好，对课程的感受这四个方面来书写。
【 亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。本文完全按照题目要求，准确定位的写出所要求的四个方面。按照时间顺序，逻辑思路清晰，条理清楚，疑问句与肯定句参用，How are you? That is my life how about yours ?句式多样;灵活的运用了宾语从句 I think it is very heathy. Can you guess what is my favourite class?非谓语writing this letter to you to introduce making me full of …makes me feel relaxed和经典的短语get up early a cup of milk ;in our daily life have lunch such as; feel relaxed; looking forward to等等。