高考应该是college entrance examination 吧
As time goes by,I will attend the college entrance examination next year(我觉得in去掉比较通顺).Frankly speaking,i don't think i have any outstanding talent. My study(ing去掉) is in medium, and i haven't high ambition but self-knowledge. Having（用ing形式） been considered much（j加个谓语much）for a long time, i decide to attend Shanghai Fisheries University. First of all , the (加个the) score line of Shanghai Fisheries University is suitable for me. The score line will be neither too high for me to lose my confidence, nor too easy for me to lose(前面的to属于不定时,后面的lose不用加ing,用原型就可以了) my learning motivation. What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge. What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge. Finally, more and more views on sea contain large amount of resources nowadays, soi believe that what i choose(这里用原型就可以了) will play an（后面单词I开头要用an） important role in the future. Maybe my choice in others'(别人的,所以复数others加‘表示别人的) eyes is easy and meaningless.However ,combined with my practice,(这里句子语法错误,需要断开)what I choose is the right choice for me.I hope i will success and not regret it（regret是及物动词,后面要加宾语） in the future.
作文最好三段论,结尾有个总结,可以把最后一句作为最后一段. 高考应该是college entrance examination 吧
As time goes by,I will attend the college entrance examination next year(我觉得in去掉比较通顺).Frankly speaking,i don't think i have any outstanding talent. My study(ing去掉) is in medium, and i haven't high ambition but self-knowledge. Having（用ing形式） been considered much（j加个谓语much）for a long time, i decide to attend Shanghai Fisheries University. First of all , the (加个the) score line of Shanghai Fisheries University is suitable for me. The score line will be neither too high for me to lose my confidence, nor too easy for me to lose(前面的to属于不定时,后面的lose不用加ing,用原型就可以了) my learning motivation. What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge. What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge. Finally, more and more views on sea contain large amount of resources nowadays, soi believe that what i choose(这里用原型就可以了) will play an（后面单词I开头要用an） important role in the future. Maybe my choice in others'(别人的,所以复数others加‘表示别人的) eyes is easy and meaningless.However ,combined with my practice,(这里句子语法错误,需要断开)what I choose is the right choice for me.I hope i will success and not regret it（regret是及物动词,后面要加宾语） in the future.
作文最好三段论,结尾有个总结,可以把最后一句作为最后一段.