书面表达假定你是中学生梨花。在一位名叫Tiger Tom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和写作要求，给这位家长回复。 I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old．I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another．She has been doing very well in school

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假定你是中学生梨花。在一位名叫Tiger Tom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和写作要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old．I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another．She has been doing very well in school but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her．Am I wrong?

写作要点：

1．表明自己的看法；2．陈述自己的理由(可以举例说明)；3．提出至少两条建议。

写作要求：

1．短文次数不少于150(不含已经写好的部分)；

2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；

3．书写必须干净、清晰、工整。

Hi Tiger Mom

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．My idea is ________

_____________________

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答案：

解析：

Hi Tiger Mom

　　 What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so．

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission development in wisdom emotion health and life attitude never be ignored．There are many examples around us．Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were expected．The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities．Furthermore punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically．

　　So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice．More importantly let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do．

答案：

解析：

Hi Tiger Mom

　　 What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so．

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission development in wisdom emotion health and life attitude never be ignored．There are many examples around us．Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were expected．The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities．Furthermore punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically．

　　So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice．More importantly let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do．