Mary is a good girl. She is fifteen years old. She is from England. She lives in Shanghai now. she is at Shanghai No.2 Junior high school. She speaks English very well. She often helps us with our English. We help her with her Chinese. Her favorite food is fish. She likes to drink milk too. She likes Chinese food very much. On Sundays we often go for a picnic with her and fly kites. We are good friends.

分 析：
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如She often helps us with our English. On Sundays we often go for a picnic with her and fly kites.等，often等文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：
话题作文。

Mary is a good girl. She is fifteen years old. She is from England. She lives in Shanghai now. she is at Shanghai No.2 Junior high school. She speaks English very well. She often helps us with our English. We help her with her Chinese. Her favorite food is fish. She likes to drink milk too. She likes Chinese food very much. On Sundays we often go for a picnic with her and fly kites. We are good friends.

分 析：
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如She often helps us with our English. On Sundays we often go for a picnic with her and fly kites.等，often等文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：
话题作文。