不知道大家有没有这个印象,08年高考英语有这么一个作文,说是班级组织去春游,结果来到山顶,发现山上垃圾遍地,于是大家去打扫. 如果都是千篇一律的叙述,批改作文的老师就崩溃了,他们会觉得那滋味像是吃了一整年的发霉的馒头. 但是如果你试着转变一下,用58课的优美句子,让叙述变得有节奏,效果自然不同. The students were so excited that they would go outing, for the hard work had tired them. 交代一下他们去前的激动心情. On their way to the mountain, their thoughts were on attractive sceneries and good rest, but when they reached, both were forgotten in their sudden discovery that the top of the mountain was covered by rubbish. 用这一个句子就可以描述出他们路上的心情以及到达山顶时的惊愕的发现.为后面的打扫打好基础. 这样经典的句式在新概念的课文中不胜枚举,如果你感兴趣,可以翻开书来,细细体会,多多进行仿写,渐渐你会提高巨大.希望这个理念对您的写作有所帮助. 请记住：近朱者赤,也就是多看好的,经典的作品,你慢慢就变成了文坛巨匠. 不知道大家有没有这个印象,08年高考英语有这么一个作文,说是班级组织去春游,结果来到山顶,发现山上垃圾遍地,于是大家去打扫. 如果都是千篇一律的叙述,批改作文的老师就崩溃了,他们会觉得那滋味像是吃了一整年的发霉的馒头. 但是如果你试着转变一下,用58课的优美句子,让叙述变得有节奏,效果自然不同. The students were so excited that they would go outing, for the hard work had tired them. 交代一下他们去前的激动心情. On their way to the mountain, their thoughts were on attractive sceneries and good rest, but when they reached, both were forgotten in their sudden discovery that the top of the mountain was covered by rubbish. 用这一个句子就可以描述出他们路上的心情以及到达山顶时的惊愕的发现.为后面的打扫打好基础. 这样经典的句式在新概念的课文中不胜枚举,如果你感兴趣,可以翻开书来,细细体会,多多进行仿写,渐渐你会提高巨大.希望这个理念对您的写作有所帮助. 请记住：近朱者赤,也就是多看好的,经典的作品,你慢慢就变成了文坛巨匠.