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求能批改英语作文的网站 我记得原来好象星火英语可以,但现在找不到了.帮忙给一个能批改英语作文的网站啊?收费的也行,别太高了,明年要高考了,我英语一塌糊涂,得恶补作文啊.求助各位大侠.顺便帮忙把这片作文批改一下It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.some students plant trees, other sudents carry water. we were work hard. we wer

2019-04-30

求能批改英语作文的网站 我记得原来好象星火英语可以,但现在找不到了.帮忙给一个能批改英语作文的网站啊?收费的也行,别太高了,明年要高考了,我英语一塌糊涂,得恶补作文啊.求助各位大侠.顺便帮忙把这片作文批改一下
It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.some students plant trees, other sudents carry water. we were work hard. we were very tired but we were very happy. Because we all know our work very good. plant trees can stop sand from blow into city and make our city more beautiful.
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1.第三句some应大写,句首的词都应大写,一定要注意.还有,时态.既然是上周,那肯定应用过去式.2.第四句,be动词后不能直接加动词原形,要么在work后加上ing,要么were去掉,work改为其过去式worked.3.接下来,"plant trees ... 1.第三句some应大写,句首的词都应大写,一定要注意.还有,时态.既然是上周,那肯定应用过去式.2.第四句,be动词后不能直接加动词原形,要么在work后加上ing,要么were去掉,work改为其过去式worked.3.接下来,"plant trees ...
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