Dear Chairman I'm a boy student from Class 1 Grade 3. I'd like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am well. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home I often help old people cross the street. On the bus I always give my seat to women with babies. Sometimes I picked up rubbish in the park. If I join the club I will be able to make more friends. Besides I can do more for others. I'll be glad if I'm received. I am waiting for your answer.Yours Tom

分 析：
本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文。请你写一封信说明自己想参加学校的“爱心俱乐部（Helping Hands Club）”。作文可以分为三个方面：1.介绍自己的特点；2.说明具体的爱心表现；3.说明加入的目的。要做到层次分明，段落清楚。人称为第一人称，主要使用一般现在时态。注意：句子结构要准确，要点要齐全，内容要合理，篇章结构要连贯，还应满足词数要求。
【亮点说明】该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。
考点：
话题作文。

Dear Chairman I'm a boy student from Class 1 Grade 3. I'd like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am well. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home I often help old people cross the street. On the bus I always give my seat to women with babies. Sometimes I picked up rubbish in the park. If I join the club I will be able to make more friends. Besides I can do more for others. I'll be glad if I'm received. I am waiting for your answer.Yours Tom

分 析：
本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文。请你写一封信说明自己想参加学校的“爱心俱乐部（Helping Hands Club）”。作文可以分为三个方面：1.介绍自己的特点；2.说明具体的爱心表现；3.说明加入的目的。要做到层次分明，段落清楚。人称为第一人称，主要使用一般现在时态。注意：句子结构要准确，要点要齐全，内容要合理，篇章结构要连贯，还应满足词数要求。
【亮点说明】该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。
考点：
话题作文。