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假定英语课老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Recent we had a class meeting

2019-05-29

假定英语课老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Recent we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.Inspiring by President Xi's Chinese Dream,everyone talks excitedly about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream will be come true.I also said something about one of my dream at the meeting.I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a respectable job.To realize my dream,I must work hard to learn so much as I can,Then I can get into the good medical college where I can prepare me adequately for the job.Only by this way can I accomplish my goal.
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Recent we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.Inspiring by President Xi's Chinese Dream,everyone talks excitedly about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream will be come true.I also said something about one of my dream at the meeting.I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only∧doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a respectable job.To realize my dream,I must work hard to learn somuch as I can,Then I can get into the good medical college where I can prepare me adequately for the job.Only by this way can I accomplish my goal

1.Recent改为Recently;考查副词,此处用副词作句子的状语,意为"最近".
2.Inspiring改为Inspired;考查分词作状语,主语everyone与动词inspire是被动关系,故用过去分词作状语.
3.talks改为talked;考查动词的时态,根据上文的时间状语Recently可知此处要用一般过去时.
4.去掉be;考查动词,动词短语come true意为"实现",不能用于被动语态.
5.dream改为dreams;考查名词,根据前面的one of可知后面要用名词复数表示一个范围.
6.doctors前面加can/do;Not only 置于句首时句子用倒装,save为实意动词,故借助于do/can构成倒装句.
7.so改为as;考查固定结构,as…as…是固定结构,意为"和…一样",用于同级比较.
8.the改为a;考查冠词,此处用不定冠词a表示泛指"一所好的医科大学".
9.me改为myself;考查反身代词,prepare oneself意为"为…作准备,准备,使自己有备",
10.by改为in;考查介词,in this way是固定搭配,意为"以这种方式".
Recent we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.Inspiring by President Xi's Chinese Dream,everyone talks excitedly about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream will be come true.I also said something about one of my dream at the meeting.I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only∧doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a respectable job.To realize my dream,I must work hard to learn somuch as I can,Then I can get into the good medical college where I can prepare me adequately for the job.Only by this way can I accomplish my goal

1.Recent改为Recently;考查副词,此处用副词作句子的状语,意为"最近".
2.Inspiring改为Inspired;考查分词作状语,主语everyone与动词inspire是被动关系,故用过去分词作状语.
3.talks改为talked;考查动词的时态,根据上文的时间状语Recently可知此处要用一般过去时.
4.去掉be;考查动词,动词短语come true意为"实现",不能用于被动语态.
5.dream改为dreams;考查名词,根据前面的one of可知后面要用名词复数表示一个范围.
6.doctors前面加can/do;Not only 置于句首时句子用倒装,save为实意动词,故借助于do/can构成倒装句.
7.so改为as;考查固定结构,as…as…是固定结构,意为"和…一样",用于同级比较.
8.the改为a;考查冠词,此处用不定冠词a表示泛指"一所好的医科大学".
9.me改为myself;考查反身代词,prepare oneself意为"为…作准备,准备,使自己有备",
10.by改为in;考查介词,in this way是固定搭配,意为"以这种方式".
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